I am a Year 4 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Mrs Agnew.
Tuesday, 20 March 2018
My Trip To The Beach
In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. I was splashing in the cold water. I saw big waves. I made a sand castle and I put a sail on it. It looked like a boat. I had fun at the beach. By Ion
Hello Ion, I enjoyed reading your story about a trip to the beach with your family. I liked the way you used interesting words in your text. Well done.
Hello Ion, I enjoyed reading your story about a trip to the beach with your family. I liked the way you used interesting words in your text. Well done.
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